not a score card exactly but
some moments should be more recognized
some people who just get, who join
who expand the experience
plus
late group man also drifting
up to board
plus
hat box lady returning
from the derby waiting
in no group to see off
her rangy beau
plus
toddler niece pealing laughter pearls
at recognition
onscreen over distance
plus
tall dark man
following out of the parking garage
then chats about the challenges
of crossing the street
melting fear
subtraction yes or low scores too
must be forgiven perhaps for
not knowing, but come on
do your parts please
minus - stiff front desk receptionists without humor
minus - wrong order providers when this pretzel is my dinner
minus - patronizing, anyone: try again please
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side note
While this blog's original purpose was to keep myself honest in my practice of doing daily justwrites-- 10-minute freewrites from some unusual starting points-- it has meandered to occasionally include other sorts of writing, to address other goals, and to even include other authors. Now, its main function is as a sort of verbal/ thought outcropping in public view. These are not polished pieces, and most are completely rough drafts. As some pieces may be developed through revision, your comments are most appreciated.
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