transformative
the idea of elsewhere - of goinggone
you will never believe the Rockies until you see
rising up from flatpast
shocking into reality into view
a child's line-drawing - jagged snow on top
and yet sun
glarewild and opening
turn any corner and forget blanken wonder
we of the smooth rolling grasslands
we are waking in a dream
turning into other
welcoming the whatifs
rising toward the sky
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side note
While this blog's original purpose was to keep myself honest in my practice of doing daily justwrites-- 10-minute freewrites from some unusual starting points-- it has meandered to occasionally include other sorts of writing, to address other goals, and to even include other authors. Now, its main function is as a sort of verbal/ thought outcropping in public view. These are not polished pieces, and most are completely rough drafts. As some pieces may be developed through revision, your comments are most appreciated.
1 comment:
I love your use of language--the word combinations, the immediacy. Lovely work.
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